Monday, April 26, 2010

rain brings change

 

can you see the dewy smile of the crescent moon
nestled on high in the harbour light sky? 
it catches celestial angel tears 
from hungry wounds 
of cloud covered dreams
until it fills up
beyond his shadowy rim.

then,
it tips tender drops 
on thirsty treetops
silently releasing 
loving water drops
cleansing nature's sad sighs.

I sense the blue star in the sky tonight 
and it feels like rain.
I see the dewy smile of the crescent moon 
tip tender angel tears 
and I can feel the rain.

let it rain strength down on me.

seeds just need to grow.


ps. it was a beautiful sight last week. i hope you were watching too.

10 comments:

Twain12 said...

what a beautiful poem ♥
i didn't see it though :(

awareness said...

thank you twain. I caught the sight last week while visiting family in Ontario.

Charles LeBlanc said...

You better get off your cocoon and move on with some goody goody Blog!!!!

:P

awareness said...

Charles.... it still is a goody goody blog. Love you!

ps. did you read the blog post a week or so ago about the cross?

Charles LeBlanc said...

Just saw it yesterday..< after someone told me >

Come on.....lets move on!!!!

LIFE GOES ON!!!!!

WAY UPPPP!!!!!

WAY DOWNNNNNNN!!!

UP!!!!

DOWN!!!!
UP!!!!
DOWN!!!!

HOLD ON!!!!!

IT'S QUITE A RIDE!!!!!

IT'S ROUGHER ONCE YOU GET OLDER!!!!!!

HOLD ON TIGHT!!!!

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DOWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!

:p

JP/deb said...

i love the rhythm of this poem ... let those seeds grow.

peace,
jp/deb

awareness said...

Charles... Don't worry.... moving on and forward....up and down and all around! Learning a new dance too!

Deb...good to see you. Thank you. I'll visit your blog soon. I havent been by in so long and I look forward to reading about your trip to France.

Mark said...

Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

Marja said...

A touching magnificanet poem. Hope you are ok Take care

Gilson said...

Poetry and image combine lovingly. Beautifully written.